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Started by Jerry Jeffer, June 25, 2011, 11:21:00 AM

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Jerry Jeffer

I was assigned to write a sonnet following the strict rules of sonnets such as 10 syllables per line in Iambic pentameter etc. Of course I chose to write about archery. Here is the result of my efforts.    :dunno:  

Arrows Journey

A stick and string pulled tense in fingers grip.
The grain of yew is arcing tight in hand.
Reluctant anchor temporized let slip.
Then archer's paradox will force its bend.
Diverted meditation steals my might.
In range, my quarry flinches anxious ear.
What errant arrow streaking leaves my sight?
A stalwart beast is turning, sensing fear.
The flag of death! A gushing plume of red!
My heart surprised, and pounding hard inside.
Escape has failed! My quarry waits ahead.
I genuflect to God, my prayers confide.
With stick and string I fumble, quarry still.
The Lord has guided arrow swift to kill.
I will give thanks to the LORD because of his righteousness and will sing praise to the name of the LORD Most High.

Brad Robins

Great words!  

I love a good sonnet!

Brad
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pauljr

I dont know anything about writing, sonnets or otherwise, but that was pretty cool
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straitera

Paint another poemist. Well done.
Buddy Bell

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Doc Nock

Neat.... dunno if your short or tall but we had a prof that would tease and say, "He's a poet, his legs even show it, they're longfellows!"

You and your iambic pentameter...  
:biglaugh:  

You go, Son!
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Wannabe1

Desert Shield/Storm, Somalia and IOF Veteran
"The Mountains are calling and, I must go!" John Muir

owlbait

Well done! I was expecting something with Nantucket in it!  :bigsmyl:
Advice from The Buck:"Only little girls shoot spikers!"

KSdan

If we're not supposed to eat animals ... how come they're made out of meat? ~anon

Bears can attack people- although fewer people have been killed by bears than in all WWI and WWII combined.

Jerry Jeffer

I'm tall Doc. Lol funny saying.
I will give thanks to the LORD because of his righteousness and will sing praise to the name of the LORD Most High.

DannyBows

"Always feel the wind, and walk just like the leaves".  ("LongBow Country"--Chad Slagle, "High, Wild, and Free").

Bowwild

Cool!  Pretty neat how you were able to make such a real-life scenario fit that form!

Of course when I first saw 'sonnet' I thought you needed a "g" and a "."

(song.net)

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Ric O'Shay

Very nice Jerry. I too, like Doc, could have made it through a few more seasons with out the utterance of "Iambic Pentameter". Oh well, such is life........   :rolleyes:
I tremble for my country when I reflect that God is just.   - Thomas Jefferson


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