" Arrow met the Deer"
It actually happened so very fast
But, in my mind it was quite clear
The day I loosed a wooden shaft
And the arrow met the deer
The little deer kicked so high
I thought he was part mule
He never knew what hit him though
This simple deadly tool
In a flash he was off and through the wood
The arrow buried to the fletch
I followed as long as I possibly could
Then lost him in a stretch
The minutes ticked and passed me by
A little while seemed like forever
The trail was plain and red to follow
The shaft the heart did sever
Upon the critter I finally came
I knelt and shed a tear
For the wonderful gift that came my way
When the arrow met the deer....TW
Once again man, love it! :thumbsup:
BROTHER, YOU HAVE BEEN HAVING A GOOD DAY!!!
Yes, sometimes this happens to me. If you do a search, some of my older stuff should still be on here.
Thanks all for the good words! :thumbsup:
Yeah, you are on fire right now. Don't stop cause all of them are good reads!
Bisch
Very cool. I showed my wife and she liked it also.
tracker1: glad you both liked it. I write for all to enjoy! :thumbsup:
Great job,thanks for sharing. :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
Great poem!
Very nice,thank you.
Your poetry is wonderful, thank you!
Nice, very nice.
:thumbsup:
Let it flow brother.....let it flow
Good stuff :thumbsup: