"Brother Wind"
Whisper to me softly, O' brother wind
From whence place dost thou blow?
Help determine mine ultimate direction
And guide my journey with the longbow
Caress my face with thy gentle pass
As I stalk, undetected, in search of my foe
Hide me, I beseech thee...reveal not my transgress
And guide my journey with the longbow
Bear not my presence upon your current
And make known the secret below
To the sensitive nose of the forest dweller
And guide my journey with the longbow
But alas..., it is not to be, O' brother wind
For my words thou tossed to and fro
This way, then that way and this way again
Unknown, unseen, your ever changing flow
Thus ending, but, ending only this day
My journey with the longbow......TW
:clapper: :clapper: :clapper: That's awesome TW. Thank you.
An excellent poem that took me right to the "stalk" and captured those moments !! :thumbsup:
Nice! Thank you.
nice job bro very good!!!!!!!!
Cool!
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Great poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.
BOB
Very nice TW :campfire:
Well Done TW! :notworthy: :clapper:
Thought I'd bring this one back to the top again for new readers.
Good one!
T.W. Your poems have been nice reading lately. I hope You keep a written journal of them.
I have a Uncle who is in his late seventies who recently had a book of poems published. He was able to sell several hundred copies.
I don't know if he made much on them but it was according to him a dream come true.
Good luck and please continue to post Your poems here on TradGang.
bretto
I like it!
Very nice..!