"Perfect Release"
Ever so gently
Yet with such force
The string slips from the fingers
And sets the arrow too its course
In paradox it wiggles
Then straightens itself out
On target too its mark
In my mind there's no doubt
The flight is so beautiful
I watch it in awe
Still like a statue
Stuck at full draw
In the quiet morning air
A resounding smack
My quarry and foe
Has dropped in its track
The hunt had been long
Full of trouble and strife
But, I whispered a prayer
And gave thanks for its life
I sat there in silence
Waiting for the shaking to cease
And my mind pondered over
The perfect release
How it all came together
With that perfect release
TW Lanoy
Verry nice.
Nice.
very nice.
awesome bro! thanks for sharing!
TW,
Great poem man!
A brief moment in time many of us can easily relate to... :thumbsup:
TW, We know you are a great shot, but also a great Poet, WOW. I really love it Awesome. Very good work.
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:thumbsup: cool :notworthy:
I feel the Love!♠
that'll do, that'll do. thanks...
Martin
Very nice! I have the bowhunters prayer in my room and it's a dandy too! Jason
Nicely done! :thumbsup: :notworthy: :clapper:
Are you ever going to compile these awesome poems of yours into a book? :pray:
Jim, my wife has been asking me that same question for a few years now. You should see the pile that she has! :scared: I wrote some good ones while on my deployment.
Cool!
Bisch
LIKE!
Liked it...Liked it....Liked it....
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Excellent! :clapper: