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Title: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Bard1 on January 28, 2009, 11:25:00 PM
The last dance


Horn and Bone,
Wood and flesh,
String and sinew,
As one they mesh.

Bow bent back,
Arm straight front,
Feather to flesh,
The end of the hunt?

Predatory sight
Shaft let fly,
Magic released,
Will it live or die?

One thing dies,
One thing lives,
Hunter vs. prey
The only law nature gives.

Prey makes the hunter,
Hunter makes the prey,
Forever in natures dance,
The two must play.

Blood tells the tale,
Artemis rules this day,
Hunter follows the ruby road
In forever's sleep it lay.

Rush of joy,
Rush of sadness,
Swirling feelings,
Essence of the hunter's madness.

Kill what you love,
Love what you kill,
Strange is the dichotomy,
Of the hunters will.  

Bellows the horn blown,
To mark this victorious tragedy,
A warriors respect given,
In the one note melody.  

By Derek
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: hormoan on January 28, 2009, 11:27:00 PM
:thumbsup:  Great Derek!
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Broken Arrow 1 on January 28, 2009, 11:35:00 PM
:clapper:  good writing
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: bowhunterfrompast on January 28, 2009, 11:41:00 PM
Nice  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Ozymandius on January 29, 2009, 01:22:00 AM
There's more than one archers paradox!  Well written!
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Yolla Bolly on January 29, 2009, 05:06:00 AM
Well spoke, Ozymandius!  Thanks for the verse Derek!
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Bonebuster on January 29, 2009, 07:09:00 AM
Great poem...
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Whip on January 29, 2009, 07:19:00 AM
Very cool!   :thumbsup:      :clapper:   So much said with so few words.
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Billy on January 29, 2009, 07:45:00 AM
Precisely...
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Stick_N_String on January 29, 2009, 10:35:00 AM
:clapper:    :clapper:    :clapper:  
Daren
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: ron w on January 29, 2009, 12:08:00 PM
Nice, and true!!
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Bard1 on January 29, 2009, 11:59:00 PM
I am glad you all enjoyed it.  =)
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: adkmountainken on January 30, 2009, 06:42:00 AM
love it, great job!!!!!
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Rob DiStefano on January 30, 2009, 02:14:00 PM
well done, sir!     :clapper:
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: NorthernCaliforniaHunter on January 30, 2009, 02:18:00 PM
:thumbsup:
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: KILLER B on January 30, 2009, 03:54:00 PM
very nice thanks for sharing
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Post by: wollybear on January 30, 2009, 04:14:00 PM
this is good   :archer:  i wiil print this  :clapper:    :clapper:    :goldtooth:
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: Bakes168 on January 30, 2009, 06:48:00 PM
:clapper:    :clapper:    :clapper:
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: crossstickspro on February 08, 2009, 10:34:00 AM
I write in tha stand .. never this good  :notworthy:
Title: Re: the last dance--a poem of the hunt
Post by: FEIK77 on February 08, 2009, 10:38:00 AM
Wish i could write like that my english teacher would love me. lol
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